TOPICAL LIST OF ENTRIES xvii
Topical List
Law Practice
ADJUSTING TO A NEW WRITING SITUATION ... 13
DEADLINES, MEETING THEM ... 148
GHOST WRITING ... 201
GRACE UNDER FIRE ... 204
JUDGES, HOW TO ADDRESS ... 248
MANAGING WRITERS ... 275
MULTI-TASKING ... 292
ORAL PRESENTATIONS ... 325
PRIORITIES WITHIN ONE PROJECT ... 400
PROFESSIONAL LANGUAGE AND PRESENTATION ... 404
TIME MANAGEMENT ... 545
TRIAGE... 559
WRITING BLOCK ... 603
International Legal Writing
COMMUNICATIONS, INTERNATIONAL ... 111ENGLISH AS A SECOND LANGUAGE ... 177
GRAPHICS AND SYMBOLS IN EMAIL ... 205
Writing and Technology
ADJUSTING TO A NEW WRITING SITUATION ... 13CITATIONS, ELECTRONIC ... 82
CLEANSING ELECTRONIC DOCUMENTS ... 88
COMMUNICATIONS, ELECTRONIC ... 105
COMMUNICATIONS, REAL-TIME OR ABBREVIATED ... 117
EMAIL, HOW TO MANAGE ... 171
EMOJIS ... 172
EMOTICONS ... 173
GRAPHICS AND SYMBOLS IN EMAIL ... 205
PAPERLESS PRACTICE ... 349
PRIVACY ... 401
SOCIAL MEDIA ... 516
TEXTING UNDER THE TABLE ... 537
TWITTER ... 560
WORDS SPELLCHECKERS WON’T CATCH ... 597
WRITING AND TECHNOLOGY ... 600
Writing Process
General Concepts ADJUSTING TO A NEW WRITING SITUATION ... 13AUDIENCE ... 41
AUDIENCE OR READER? ... 43
DOCUMENT CHECKLIST ... 159
ELECTRONIC ETIQUETTE ... 168
HABITS, WRITING ... 215 HELP ... 218 MULTI-TASKING ... 292 NOTES ... 300 PAPERLESS PRACTICE ... 349 PERFECTIONISM ... 365 POLISHING ... 377 PREWRITING ... 391
PRINCIPLES OF GOOD LEGAL WRITING ... 394
PRIORITIES WITHIN ONE PROJECT ... 400
PROCESS AND PRODUCT COMPARED ... 402
PROCRASTINATION ... 403
PROFESSIONAL POSTURE ... 406
PURPOSE ... 411
REASONING, PRESENTING IT ... 437
RESEARCH AS WRITING ... 450
RESEARCH STRATEGY GUIDE ... 452
REVISING ... 460 REWRITING ... 463 THESIS SENTENCES ... 543 TIME MANAGEMENT ... 545 TRIAGE... 559 WRITING ... 599 WRITING PROCESS ... 614
Working with Other Writers CHOICES IN LEGAL WRITING ... 78
COLLABORATION ... 90
DEADLINES, MEETING THEM ... 148
EDITING... 163
GHOST WRITING ... 201
GRACE UNDER FIRE ... 204
INDEPENDENCE IN LEGAL WRITING ... 229
INSTRUCTIONS, WRITING THEM ... 234
MANAGING WRITERS ... 275
TIME MANAGEMENT ... 545
VOICE ... 585
Making Preliminary Decisions ARGUING IN THE ALTERNATIVE ... 32
AUDIENCE ... 41
COMMUNICATIONS, EMAIL ... 106
DEADLINES, MEETING THEM ... 148
ELECTRONIC FILINGS ... 168
GETTING STARTED ... 199
INTRODUCTIONS ... 237
NOTES ... 300
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ORGANIZATION FOR THOSE WHO CAN’T OUTLINE ... 330
PERFECTIONISM ... 365
PREWRITING ... 391
PRINCIPLES OF GOOD LEGAL WRITING ... 394
PROCRASTINATION ... 403 PURPOSE ... 411 READERS ... 428 REASONING, ANALOGICAL ... 433 REASONING, DEDUCTIVE ... 433 REASONING, INDUCTIVE ... 435 REASONING, MODERN ... 436 REASONING, OTHER ... 436 REASONING, POSTMODERN ... 437 REASONING, PRESENTING IT ... 437
RESEARCH STRATEGY GUIDE ... 452
SCOPE ... 491
STANDARD OF REVIEW ... 519
TABLE OF AUTHORITIES ... 535
TABLE OF CONTENTS ... 535
THEME ... 540
THEORY OF THE CASE ... 541
TIME MANAGEMENT ... 545 VOICE ... 585 WRITING, OBJECTIVE ... 604 WRITING, PERSUASIVE ... 606 WRITING PROCESS ... 614 WRITING TO ATTORNEYS ... 616 WRITING TO CLIENTS ... 618
Writing Techniques
Researching LEGAL ANALYSIS ... 255 MANDATORY AUTHORITY ... 278 NOTES ... 300 PERSUASIVE AUTHORITY ... 370 READERS ... 428 REASONING, PRESENTING IT ... 437 RESEARCH AS WRITING ... 450RESEARCH STRATEGY GUIDE ... 452
STANDARD OF REVIEW ... 519
SYNTHESIS ... 534
THEORY OF THE CASE ... 541
TRIAGE... 559
UPDATING THE LAW ... 565
WHEN TO STOP ... 588
Citing ALWD GUIDE TO LEGAL CITATION ... 19
BLUEBOOK ... 55
CITATIONS ... 79
CITATIONS, BASIC FORMAT ... 81
CITATIONS, ELECTRONIC ... 82
CITATIONS, PARALLEL ... 83
CITATIONS, PINPOINT ... 83
CITATIONS, SIGNALS ... 84
CITATIONS, STRING ... 85
CITATIONS, VARYING FORMATS ... 86
FOOTNOTES... 192 PARENTHESES ... 357 PARENTHETICALS ... 358 POLISHING ... 377 Reasoning REASONING, ANALOGICAL ... 433 REASONING, DEDUCTIVE ... 433 REASONING, INDUCTIVE ... 435 REASONING, MODERN ... 436 REASONING, POSTMODERN ... 437 REASONING, PRESENTING IT ... 437 Persuading ARGUING IN THE ALTERNATIVE ... 32
BAD NEWS, GIVING IT ... 43
BAD NEWS, SOFTENING IT ... 47
COMMUNICATIONS, PERSUASIVE ... 114
COMMUNICATIONS, TONE OF ... 117
COUNTERARGUMENTS, HOW TO HANDLE ... 142
ORGANIZATION, LARGE-SCALE ... 333
ORGANIZATION, SMALL-SCALE ... 335
OUTLINES ... 341
POINT OF VIEW, OBJECTIVE TO PERSUASIVE ... 376
POSITIONS OF EMPHASIS ... 380 PRECISION ... 384 READERS ... 428 REASONING, ANALOGICAL ... 433 REASONING, DEDUCTIVE ... 433 REASONING, INDUCTIVE ... 435 REASONING, MODERN ... 436 REASONING, POSTMODERN ... 437 REASONING, PRESENTING IT ... 437 SENTENCE LENGTH ... 495 SENTENCE STRUCTURE... 500 SHORT SENTENCES ... 510 STARE DECISIS ... 520 STYLE ... 525
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TOUGH, SOUNDING THAT WAY ... 555
VOICE ... 585 WRITING, PERSUASIVE ... 606 WRITING TO ATTORNEYS ... 616 WRITING TO CLIENTS ... 618 Organizing Large-Scale Organization HEADINGS ... 216 LEGAL ANALYSIS ... 255 ORGANIZATION, CHRONOLOGICAL ... 330
ORGANIZATION FOR THOSE WHO CAN’T OUTLINE ... 330
ORGANIZATION, TOPICAL ... 336 ORGANIZATION, LARGE-SCALE ... 333 REASONING, ANALOGICAL ... 433 REASONING, DEDUCTIVE ... 433 REASONING, INDUCTIVE ... 435 REASONING, MODERN ... 436 REASONING, OTHER ... 436 REASONING, POSTMODERN ... 437 REASONING, PRESENTING IT ... 437 TOPICAL ORGANIZATION ... 554 Small-Scale Organization CONNECTIONS, MAKING THEM ... 132
LISTS, STRUCTURE OF ... 266
LOGICAL LINKS ... 274
ORGANIZATION, SMALL-SCALE ... 335
PARAGRAPHS ... 352
SENTENCE STRUCTURE ... 500
TOPIC SENTENCES OR THESIS SENTENCES? ... 555
TRANSITIONS ... 556
Organization in Specific Documents BRIEFS ... 57 BRIEFS, AMICUS ... 60 BRIEFS, APPELLATE ... 62 BRIEFS, PRETRIAL ... 65 BRIEFS, REPLY ... 65 BRIEFS, TRIAL ... 66 CONCLUSIONS ... 129 DISCUSSION SECTION ... 158 INTRODUCTIONS ... 237 MEMOS ... 281 PROCEDURAL OR SUBSTANTIVE? ... 402 QUESTIONS PRESENTED ... 414 Process of Organization DEADLINES, MEETING THEM ... 148
HABITS, WRITING ... 215
NOTES ... 300
ORGANIZATION FOR THOSE WHO CAN’T OUTLINE ... 330
ORGANIZATION, SMALL-SCALE ... 335 OUTLINES ... 341 POLISHING ... 377 POWERPOINTS ... 383 PREWRITING ... 391 REVISING ... 460 REWRITING ... 463 TIME MANAGEMENT ... 545 WRITING PROCESS ... 614 Writing COMMUNICATIONS, CLOSINGS FOR ... 104
COMMUNICATIONS, ELECTRONIC ... 105
COMMUNICATIONS, EMAIL ... 106
COMMUNICATIONS, INTERNATIONAL ... 111
COMMUNICATIONS, OPENINGS FOR ... 113
COMMUNICATIONS, PERSUASIVE ... 114
COMMUNICATIONS, REAL-TIME OR ABBREVIATED ... 117
COMMUNICATIONS, TONE OF ... 117 DICTATION ... 155 DRAFTING ... 162 DRAFTS ... 162 WRITING ... 599 WRITING BLOCK ... 603 WRITING PROCESS ... 614 WRITING TO ATTORNEYS ... 616 WRITING TO CLIENTS ... 618 Structuring Sentences AGREEMENT, SUBJECTS AND VERBS ... 16
CLAUSES ... 87 COMPLEX SENTENCES ... 124 COMPOUND SENTENCES ... 125 CONJUNCTIONS ... 131 DEPENDENT CLAUSES ... 152 INTRUSIVE PHRASES ... 240 PARALLEL STRUCTURE ... 354 PHRASES ... 371 SENTENCE FRAGMENTS ... 494 SENTENCE, PARTS OF ... 495 SENTENCE STRUCTURE... 500 SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT ... 529 SUBORDINATION ... 530
TOPICAL LIST OF ENTRIES xxiii Choosing Words
Accuracy
ACCURACY ... 5
AMBIGUITY, WAYS TO AVOID ... 19
OF COURSE ... 311 PRECISION ... 384 THIS ... 544 Legal Terms ABOVE ... 5 AFFECT OR EFFECT? ... 14 AFORESAID ... 15 ATTORNEY OR LAWYER? ... 40 BLUEBOOK ... 55 DICTA ... 154 EQUITY ... 180 IMPLY OR INFER? ... 228 JARGON ... 248
JUDGES, HOW TO ADDRESS ... 248
KEY TERMS ... 253 LEGALESE ... 260 MIGHT OR MAY? ... 287 PRECISION ... 384 PURSUANT TO ... 412 TERMS OF ART ... 536 WHETHER ... 590 Conciseness AS A MATTER OF FACT ... 37
AT THIS POINT IN TIME ... 40
CLEARLY ... 89
CONCISENESS ... 126
FACT OF THE MATTER, THE ... 186
FACT THAT, THE... 187
FLOWERY LANGUAGE ... 190
FOR THE PERIOD OF ... 198
IN ADVANCE OF ... 229
IN ORDER TO OR TO? ... 233
IN QUESTION ... 233
IT IS SAID THAT, IT WOULD SEEM THAT, IT MIGHT BE SAID THAT ... 247 IT IS . . . THAT ... 247 JARGON ... 248 OBVIOUSLY ... 311 REPETITION ... 447 THERE IS . . . THAT ... 542
UNTIL SUCH TIME AS ... 564
Clarity and Readability COLLOQUIALISMS ... 94 KEY TERMS ... 253 JARGON ... 248 LEGALESE ... 260 LOGICAL LINKS ... 274 MODIFIERS ... 288 PRECISION ... 384 PRIOR TO ... 401 READABILITY ... 425 REALLY ... 433 RESPECTIVELY ... 459 TERMS OF ART ... 536 TRANSITIONS ... 556 UNDOUBTEDLY ... 562 UTTERLY ... 567 VARIETY ... 567 VERY ... 584
Specific Wording Techniques ALLITERATION ... 17 ASSONANCE... 38 CLICHÉ ... 89 EMPHASIS ... 174 FORMALITY, LEVEL OF ... 194 HYPERBOLE ... 222 IDIOM ... 225 PERSUASIVE WRITING ... 371 POSITIONS OF EMPHASIS ... 380 REPETITION ... 447 RHYMES ... 467 TONE ... 550 VARIETY ... 567 VOICE ... 585 Tone BAD NEWS, SOFTENING IT ... 47
COMMUNICATIONS, TONE OF ... 117
EMOJIS ... 172
EMOTICONS ... 173
FORMALITY, LEVEL OF ... 194
PROFESSIONAL LANGUAGE AND PRESENTATION ... 404
SOCIAL MEDIA ... 516
TONE ... 550
TOUGH, SOUNDING THAT WAY ... 555
Using Graphic Aids BOLDFACE TYPE ... 55
TOPICAL LIST OF ENTRIES xxv CHARTS... 78 EMOJIS ... 172 EMOTICONS ... 173 FONT CHOICES ... 191 FONT SIZE ... 191
GRAPHICS, HOW TO USE ... 205
GRAPHICS, WHICH FORM TO USE ... 210
ITALICS ... 245
LISTS, WHEN TO USE ... 272
POWERPOINTS ... 383 TYPEFACE SIZE ... 560 UNDERLINING ... 561
Legal Documents
Memos ANALOGOUS CASES ... 23 APPLICATION ... 31 BRIEF ANSWERS ... 57 CAPTIONS ... 71 CASE BRIEFS ... 74 CONCLUSIONS ... 129 CONCLUSORY ... 130 DISCUSSION SECTION ... 158 INTRODUCTIONS ... 237 LEGAL ANALYSIS ... 255 MEMOS... 281 OBJECTIVITY ... 310 ORGANIZATION, LARGE-SCALE ... 333 ORGANIZATION, SMALL-SCALE ... 335 OUTLINES ... 341 QUESTIONS PRESENTED ... 414 READERS ... 428 REASONING, ANALOGICAL ... 433 REASONING, DEDUCTIVE ... 433 REASONING, INDUCTIVE ... 435 REASONING, MODERN ... 436 REASONING, OTHER ... 436 REASONING, POSTMODERN ... 437 REASONING, PRESENTING IT ... 437 STARE DECISIS ... 520 STATEMENT OF FACTS ... 521 WRITING, OBJECTIVE ... 604 WRITING TO ATTORNEYS ... 616 Briefs ARGUING IN THE ALTERNATIVE ... 32ARGUMENT SECTION ... 33
BRIEFS, AMICUS ... 60 BRIEFS, APPELLATE ... 62 BRIEFS, PRETRIAL ... 65 BRIEFS, REPLY ... 65 BRIEFS, TRIAL... 66 CONCLUSIONS ... 129
COUNTERARGUMENTS, HOW TO HANDLE ... 142
CREDIBILITY ... 144
DESIGN ... 153
ISSUE STATEMENTS ... 241
MEMORANDUM OF POINTS AND AUTHORITIES ... 281
PERSUASIVE WRITING ... 371
POINT HEADINGS ... 375
POINT OF VIEW, OBJECTIVE TO PERSUASIVE ... 376
READERS ... 428 REASONING, ANALOGICAL ... 433 REASONING, DEDUCTIVE ... 433 REASONING, INDUCTIVE ... 435 REASONING, MODERN ... 436 REASONING, OTHER ... 436 REASONING, POSTMODERN ... 437 REASONING, PRESENTING IT ... 437 STANDARD OF REVIEW ... 519 STARE DECISIS ... 520
STATEMENT OF THE CASE ... 522
SUMMARY OF THE ARGUMENT... 531
SYLLOGISMS ... 532
WRITING TO ATTORNEYS ... 616
Various Legal Documents ANSWERS TO COMPLAINTS ... 25 BENCH MEMOS ... 51 BRIEFS ... 57 BRIEFS, AMICUS ... 60 BRIEFS, APPELLATE ... 62 BRIEFS, PRETRIAL ... 65 BRIEFS, REPLY ... 65 BRIEFS, TRIAL... 66 CASE BRIEFS ... 74 COMMUNICATIONS, EMAIL ... 106 COMPLAINTS ... 122 CONTRACTS ... 137 CORPORATE DOCUMENTS ... 139 INFORMATIVE ARTICLES ... 231 LEGISLATION ... 263
MEMORANDUM OF POINTS AND AUTHORITIES ... 281
TOPICAL LIST OF ENTRIES xxvii
OPINIONS, LEGAL ... 317
ORDERS ... 329
PLEADINGS ... 372
SCHOLARLY WRITING ... 475
SETTLEMENT LETTERS AND EMAIL ... 507
VERIFICATION ... 583 WILLS ... 592
Checklists
DOCUMENT CHECKLIST ... 159 POLISHING CHECKLIST ... 378 PREWRITING CHECKLIST ... 393PRINCIPLES OF GOOD LEGAL WRITING ... 394
RESEARCH PROCESS CHECKLIST ... 451
RESEARCH STRATEGY GUIDE ... 452
REVISING CHECKLIST ... 462
REWRITING CHECKLIST ... 465
SCHOLARLY WRITING CHECKLIST ... 476
UPDATING THE LAW ... 565
WHEN TO STOP ... 588
Grammar Concepts
Generally BENDING THE RULES ... 53GRAMMAR ... 205 SENTENCE FRAGMENTS ... 494 Nouns ABSTRACT NOUNS ... 5 ANTECEDENTS ... 27 COLLECTIVE NOUNS ... 94 NOMINALIZATION ... 297 NOUNS ... 305 PROPER NOUNS ... 410 Verbs ACTIVE VOICE ... 8 PASSIVE VOICE ... 360 PAST PARTICIPLES ... 362 SPLIT INFINITIVES ... 517 VERBS, AUXILIARY ... 568
VERBS, EFFECTIVE USE OF ... 570
VERBS, IRREGULAR ... 573
VERBS, LINKING ... 574
VERBS, MOODS ... 574
VERBS, PARTICIPLES ... 576
VERBS, TENSES ... 577
VERB TENSES, WHICH TO USE? ... 582
Modifiers ADJECTIVES ... 11 ADVERBS ... 14 APPOSITIVE ... 32 ARTICLES, GRAMMAR ... 37 MODIFIERS ... 288 MODIFIERS, DANGLING ... 289 MODIFIERS, MISPLACED ... 289 MODIFIERS, SQUINTING ... 290 NONRESTRICTIVE PHRASES ... 299 PREPOSITIONAL PHRASES ... 387 PREPOSITIONS ... 388 PRONOUNS ... 407 Punctuation ABBREVIATING DATES, NAMES, STATES, AND TITLES ... 1
ABBREVIATIONS IN TEXT ... 4 ACCURACY ... 5 APOSTROPHES ... 28 BRACKETS ... 56 CAPITALIZATION ... 69 COLONS ... 94 COMMA, OXFORD ... 97 COMMAS ... 98 DASHES ... 146 ELLIPSES ... 170 EM OR EN DASH? ... 170 EXCLAMATION POINTS ... 182 HYPHENS ... 222 LISTS, STRUCTURE OF ... 266 PERIODS ... 366 QUESTION MARKS ... 413 RUN-ON SENTENCES ... 471 SEMICOLONS ... 492
SPACING BETWEEN SENTENCES ... 517
Usage ABBREVIATING DATES, NAMES, STATES, AND TITLES ... 1
ABHORRENCE OF OR ABHORRENCE FOR?... 4
AFFECT OR EFFECT? ... 14
AGREE TO OR AGREE WITH? ... 16
ALL-ROUND OR ALL AROUND? ... 17
ALL READY OR ALREADY? ... 17
ALRIGHT OR ALL RIGHT? ... 18
ALTHOUGH OR THOUGH? ... 18
ALTOGETHER OR ALL TOGETHER? ... 19
A.M. ... 19
TOPICAL LIST OF ENTRIES xxix AND/OR ... 24 AS IF OR AS THOUGH? ... 38 AS OR LIKE? ... 38 AS TO ... 40 BAD OR BADLY? ... 49 BASED ON ... 49 BASICALLY ... 49 B.C. OR B.C.E.? ... 50 BECAUSE OR SINCE? ... 50 BEST OR BETTER? ... 54 BLACK ... 55
CAN HARDLY OR CAN’T HARDLY? ... 68
CANNOT OR CAN NOT? ... 68
CAN OR COULD? ... 69
CAN OR MAY? ... 69
CERTAIN ... 78
CLEARLY ... 89
COLLOQUIALISMS ... 94
COMPOUND WORDS, WHEN TO HYPHENATE ... 126
CONTACT ... 134
CONTEND ... 134
CONTINUAL OR CONTINUOUS? ... 136
CORRESPOND TO OR CORRESPOND WITH? ... 142
COULD CARE LESS OR COULDN’T CARE LESS? ... 142
DIFFERENT FROM OR DIFFERENT THAN? ... 156
DIFFERENT FROM OR DIFFERENT THAN? ... 156
EACH ... 163 ELEGANT VARIATION ... 169 EMAIL OR E-MAIL? ... 172 EMINENT OR IMMINENT? ... 172 END RESULT ... 177 ETC. ... 181 EVERYBODY ... 181 EVERYONE ... 181
FACT OF THE MATTER, THE ... 186
FARTHER OR FURTHER? ... 187 FEWER OR LESS? ... 188 FIGURATIVE MEANING ... 188 FLOWERY LANGUAGE ... 190 FOREGO OR FORGO? ... 193 GOOD OR WELL? ... 204 HANGED OR HUNG? ... 216 HYPERBOLE ... 222 IF AND WHEN ... 227 IMPACT ... 228 IMPLY OR INFER? ... 228 IN ADVANCE OF ... 229
JARGON ... 248 LAWYER OR ATTORNEY? ... 254 LAY OR LIE? ... 254 LEAD OR LED? ... 255 MATHEMATICAL SYMBOLS ... 279 MAY OR MIGHT? ... 280 MOST IMPORTANTLY ... 290 OBLIVIOUS OF OR OBLIVIOUS TO? ... 311 OK, O.K., OR OKAY? ... 311
ON LINE, ONLINE, OR ON-LINE? ... 312
ORAL OR VERBAL? ... 325
OTHERWISE ... 340
PADDING ... 349
PER ... 364
PERCENT, %, OR PER CENT? ... 365
PHENOMENA OR PHENOMENONS? ... 371
PREPOSITION, ENDING A SENTENCE WITH ... 388
PRINCIPAL OR PRINCIPLE? ... 394 PROCEDURAL OR SUBSTANTIVE? ... 402 REALLY ... 433 REGARDLESS OR IRREGARDLESS? ... 447 RECUR OR REOCCUR? ... 446 S/HE ... 510
SOMEDAY OR SOME DAY? ... 516
SOMEONE ... 516 THEIRS OR THEIR’S? ... 540 THEREFORE OR THEREFOR? ... 542 TO BE ... 549 UNTO ... 565 UTTERLY ... 567 VERY ... 584 VIRTUALLY ... 584 VIZ. ... 584 WE ... 587 WHEN OR IF? ... 588
WHETHER OR WHETHER OR NOT? ... 591
WHOEVER OR WHOMEVER? ... 591
WHO OR WHOM? ... 592