Introducing the Paragraph
Introducing the Paragraph
Written by Hai Nguyen
Introduction
Theme
Reasons for writingGoals
- to write a paragraph
- to understand the parts of a paragraph
- to understand the characteristics of a
paragraph
- to understand and do the writing process
- to begin a writing journal
The parts of
a paragraph
In academic writing
A paragraph is a small unit of writing that focuses on
one idea. This one idea is explained and developed in the paragraph. The first line of each paragraph is
indented. The indentation signals the beginning of a new paragraph.
A paragraph generally has three parts:
a topic sentence support
Sample
Parents can help their children be successful in school by encouraging them. Children usually enjoy playing games
instead of studying their boring lessons, so parents have to take the responsibility to monitor their studying and to remind them to do their homework at home after school. Parents should also encourage their children to study by buying story books with
pictures, or they can buy text books or tapes that help children learn to spell or read. The best way to encourage children to study efficiently is to reward them when they get an "A." As a child, I experienced this. My parents gave me a gift if I had studied well, and then I was very excited. So. if parents really want their children to succeed in school. they need to pay
attention to their children's studies and encourage them. *
The Topic Sentence
•
The
topic sentence
is the
main-idea
sentence. It is the most general and most
important sentence of the paragraph.
•
It tells the following:
the topic
-
what the paragraph is about
the controlling idea
- the writer's
attitude or idea about the topic
The controlling idea
l
is a word or phrase that
focuses or
controls
the information in the rest of the
paragraph. The reader can ask questions
about the controlling idea and
expect to
Analyze
In the paragraph above, the topic sentence is the following:
Parents can help their children be successful in school by encouraging them.
The topic of the sentence is how parents can help children succeed in school; the controlling idea is
encouraging. The reader might ask the following
questions and expect the paragraph to answer them:
How can parents encourage their children?
What specific things should parents do to encourage their children?
Support
The support in a paragraph explains or
develops the topic sentence. The supporting part can be
narratives, details, facts,
examples, explanation, or statistics
. All of the support relatesto the main idea
stated in the topic sentence and shows why the topicHere is a brief list of
the support
Topic Sentence:
Parents can help their children be successful in school by encouraging them.
Support:
1.
Parents can encourage children by reminding them to do their homework.2
. Parents can encourage children by buying them books and tapes to help them learn.3
. Parents can encourage children by rewarding them.Conclusion
The
conclusion
of a paragraphsummarizes
or comments
on the main idea. In aone-paragraph composition, the conclusion is
one
or two sentences
. Often, the concludingsentences close the paragraph by
returning to
the main idea of the paragraph
. They do this byrepeating a key word or phrase
from the topic sentenceConclusion
Topic Sentence:
Parents can help their children be successful in school by encouraging them.
Concluding Sentence:
So, if parents really want their children to
succeed in school, they need to pay attention to their children's studies and encourage them.
Reminder
Sometimes in the concluding sentences, the writer does not
use the exact key words from the topic sentence but
rephrases them, using other words that mean the same thing. This gives some variety to the paragraph. Notice how the key words in the topic sentence above could be
rephrased:
Concluding Sentence:
Parents who want their children to do their best in school must support and pay attention to them.
Unity
One characteristic of a good paragraph is unity. In a unified paragraph, all the sentences
relate
to the topic and develop the controlling
idea
. If a sentence or idea in a paragraph does not relate to the main idea, the paragraph lacks unity. The sentences that do not relate to the main idea should be taken out of the paragraph and perhaps developed in another paragraph.Coherence
Another important characteristic of a good paragraph is coherence. In a coherent
paragraph, the ideas are
arranged logically
. The ideas and sentences are in an order thatmakes sense to the reader. If the ideas are
logically arranged, the reader can easily follow the progression of ideas. He or she can quickly understand the main idea and follow the writer's thinking.
Coherence
Which of the two following paragraphs is preferable? Why?
A.
Pizza, which is made with flour, yeast, salt and water. Pizza can be compared with Greek and Middle Eastern flat breads, but it is most firmly associated with Naples in ItalyB.
Pizza is made with flour, yeast, salt andwater. Pizza can be compared with Greek and Middle Eastern flat breads. Pizza is most firmly associated with Naples in Italy.