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Of Mice and Men

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Context…

All: be able to show familiarity with the

purpose

of a text and the

impact

on

readers

Most: be able to show understanding of the

writer’s

attitudes

Some: be able to show insight into the

implications

and

relevance

of the text

Title

: Of Mice & Men

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Name:

John Steinbeck

Dates:

1902 – 1968

Career:

Steinbeck was born in Salinas,

California, and many of his novels are set in

this part of America. Before his career as a

writer began, Steinbeck worked as a

construction labourer

and a

caretaker

.

His first novel

Cup of Gold

was published in

1929.

Of Mice and Men

was published in

1937. His most famous novel,

The Grapes of

Wrath

came out in 1939. Many of his books,

such as

East of Eden

also became films. In

1962 John Steinbeck was awarded the

prestigious Nobel Prize for Literature.

Title

: Of Mice & Men

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The Grapes of Wrath

deals with a group of people

known as the

‘Okies’.

These were migrant workers

who left the

dust bowl

of Oklahoma when their

crops failed. They travelled to California, in search

of work and

‘the American Dream’,

the hope of a

bright new future in the West.

The Okies were badly treated, and many of them

died on the journey, or starved to death after

arriving in California, the ‘land of plenty’. John

Steinbeck was deeply affected by their plight.

Much of his work deals with the

poor treatment

of

such workers, and the way that

society mistreats

its poorest people.

Title

: Of Mice & Men

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Title: Of Mice & Men

LO: what is the context of our novel?

The Great Depression: Task

Make notes on the

context

, ready for a quiz.

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Title: Of Mice & Men

LO: what is the context of our novel?

The Great Depression Quiz

 

1. What years are we talking about?

2. What happened in 1929 that devastated the US stock

market?

3. How many banks went out of business?

4. How many savings accounts vanished?

5. How many businesses went bankrupt?

6. How many people were unemployed?

7. How many schools were closed?

8. Admissions to mental hospitals went up by what percent?

9. How many men became homeless? 2

10. Suicides went up by what percent?

11. What caused the crops to die?

12.What storms caused havoc?

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Of Mice and Men

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Title:

What was the American

Dream?

Starter:

What do you remember

about the Great Depression from

yesterday? Draw a spider diagram

and write notes.

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Themes in ‘Of Mice and Men’

The American Dream

The American Dream

:

Everyone has a dream to

strive for. The poor ranch

hands wish to be their own

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What is the American Dream?

The term was first used by

James Truslow

Adams

in his book

The Epic of America

which

was written in 1931. He states:

"The American Dream is "that dream of a land

in which life should be better and richer and

fuller for everyone, with opportunity for each

according to ability or achievement. It is not a

dream of motor cars and high wages, but a

dream of social order in which each man and

each woman shall be able to achieve the

fullest stature of which they are capable of,

and be recognized by others for what they are,

regardless of the circumstances of birth or

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Is the American dream possible in

the historical context of the

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Themes in ‘Of Mice and Men’

The American Dream

…Read ‘the dream’ section

TASK:

Draw a table and to show the

contrast between the reality of their

lives their ‘American dream’

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Their perfect world is one of

independence

. Workers like Lennie

and George have

no family

,

no

home

, and very little control over

their lives.

They have to do what the boss tells

them and they have little to show for

it. They only own what they can carry.

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George and Lennie have a dream, even

before they arrive at their new job on the

ranch, to make enough money to live "off

the fat of the land" and be their own

bosses. Lennie will be permitted, then, to

tend the rabbits.

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Crook

s

Crooks

Candy

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‘To a Mouse’ By Robert Burns

Controlled Assessment

Preparation

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Starter

List as many similarities and differences

between

men

and

mice

that you

can think of.

Title: What is the significance

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The poem…

Steinbeck was inspired by this poem and

used a line from the poem as his title for

the novel.

‘To a Mouse’ By Robert Burns

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Match the summary sentences to

the stanzas of the poem…

1. The mouse needs to build a new house as the winter

is coming and he needs a safe place to hibernate

.

2. The narrator comments on the fact that the mouse is not

the only living creature that has planned something that

has later gone wrong.

3. A mouse is scared of the loud, frightful noises he

can hear.

4. The narrator is fearful of what the future holds for him.

5. The narrator apologises for the way he has ‘interrupted’ the mouse’s world.

6. The mouse’s next is destroyed and he has no-where to live during the harsh winter months.

7. The narrator understands that a mouse may have to steal some of the crops in a field, but this is only in order to

survive and does not really harm anyone.

8. The mouse was clever to forward plan the building of his new nest as the weather is about to change.

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In light of the poem, answer these

two questions.

In what ways are the mouse and

man similar?

How does the idea in this poem link

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How does Burns show his

view that dreams are

worthless?

TASK: Using lines 38 and 39, write a

PEEL

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How does Burns show his view

that dreams are worthless?

In ‘To a mouse’, Robert Burns views

dreams as worthless, for example,

The best laid plans o’ mice and

men gang aft agley’.

This shows

that it doesn’t matter how carefully

the mouse planned/dreamed for his

hibernation he could not prevent

the hand of fate from ruining it.

This emphasises Burns’ view that

dreams are a foolish waste of time.

Uses key words

from the question in the Point.

Quotation

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On your own, think about these

questions….

1. Are dreams important even if they

don’t come true?

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Of Mice and Men-

Plot

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Title

:

Of Mice and Men

– Plot review and recap

STARTER

:

Turn to the opening pages

of your resource book and begin

filling in the mind maps considering

themes

.

You will need to

add to these

mind maps as

we watch the

DVD

Make notes on Crooks and Curley’s Wife as you

watch.

How does Steinbeck comment on American society

through these characters?

(Think about the work we did

on context and the American Dream).

Draw the table below to complete as you watch.

There will be a ‘no hands up’ quiz after the DVD

– 3 strikes and you are out.

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Plenary Quiz – Ch.1

Plot summary (Section One)

Copy and complete the summary by filling in the

blanks.

Two men called George and __________ make their way

down to a clearing beside the __________ River near the

town of __________ in __________. They are heading to a

nearby __________ to find work. Lennie has a dead

__________, which he likes to stroke, in his __________, but

George makes him __________ it away. They warm some

__________ on a fire for __________ and Lennie asks

__________ to tell him about the house and land they are

going to__________ one day.

mouse town California Lennie throw hide supper

 

George ranch Oklahoma beans pocket own

 

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Plenary Quiz – Ch.2

Plot summary (Section Two)

Complete the summary by filling in the blanks

.

 

George and Lennie __________ at the __________

where an old __________ shows them their

__________. They meet the __________, who

__________George about Lennie.

The swamper comes back with his __________. They

meet the __________ son, whose name is __________.

They also __________ a man called __________, whose

dog has just had some __________. Curley's new

__________ comes in, looking for her husband.

 

 

 

boss rooms beds arrive boss’s puppies meet Slim

questions girlfriend Curley dog wife swamper

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Plenary Quiz – Ch.3

Plot summary (Section Three)

Complete the summary by filling in the blanks.

George and __________ sit in the bunk house. George tells Slim about his __________ with Lennie and explains __________ they had to leave __________. Lennie arrives, __________ the puppy Slim has given him. __________ makes him take it back to the barn.

Candy and Carlson come in. __________ tells Candy he ought to shoot his old dog. __________ Candy agrees. Carlson takes the dog away. Slim goes to __________ an injured mule. The rest of the men start talking about __________. Then Curley appears, looking for his wife. __________ of Slim, he rushes out to the barn. Some of the others __________, leaving George and Lennie __________ with Candy. George and Lennie talk about their __________ of the farm, and Candy offers to __________ his savings if they let him join them.

The other men return. _________ and Slim are __________. Curley turns on Lennie, who __________ his hand. Slim tells Carlson to get Curley to a __________. Curley agrees to say he caught his hand in a machine.

George Curley Weed Slim Carlson Suspicious doctor tend cuddling pool Eventually Soledad shoot

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You are going to be shown a series

of images. Tell me what each

scene still represents in the plot.

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Of Mice and Men-

Plot

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Title

:

Themes Recap and Revision

gingham emphasis frantic monotonou s belligeren t retort

Wild with fear

Hostile and aggressive

Flat and dull

To answer back sharply, angrily or cheekily

White checked cotton cloth

Stress placed on a word to show importance

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VOCAB ANSWERS

gingham emphasis frantic monotonou s belligeren t retort

Wild with fear

Hostile and aggressive

Flat and dull

To answer back sharply, angrily or cheekily

White checked cotton cloth

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Group Work

The American

Dream

Discrimination

Hardship

Loneliness

Friendship

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Key Themes

TASK: Using your grids...

1. List the characters that are linked to

your theme

2. Quote – find a quote which highlights

this theme. E.g:

The American Dream

– George and Lennie

3. Discuss the theme and its

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Themes

TASK:

Complete the 3 remaining mind

maps in your booklet.

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Of Mice and Men- Curley’s

Wife

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Title:

Curley’s

Wife

STARTER

We know more about Steinbeck’s feelings towards

Curley’s wife than we do about any other character.

He wrote to the first actress to play her and explained his

feelings towards the character.

Read the letter – how does this change your view

of the character?

STARTER

We know more about Steinbeck’s feelings towards

Curley’s wife than we do about any other character.

He wrote to the first actress to play her and explained his

feelings towards the character.

Read the letter – how does this change your view

of the character?

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Learning Objectives

What does the reader learn about Curley’s

wife’s character?

How does Steinbeck use Curley’s wife’s

attitude and behaviour to reveal her

character?

How does Curley’s wife link to the themes of

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Of Mice and

Men-Curley’s Wife continued

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STARTER

Finish annotating the extract on

Curley’s Wife from

Ch.5 ‘Curley’s

Wife’s Dream’

and complete the

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...what’s in a name?

Why does Curley’s Wife have no name?

Steinbeck provides no name for Curley’s

Wife. This helps create the impression of

her as someone with no individual

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Look back at the first introduction

to Curley’s Wife (Chapter 2) and

complete the PEEL chain table in

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For example...

Point Evidence Explanation Link

Curley’s wife’s body language is deliberately provocative when she leans…

‘so that her body was thrown forward,’

This suggestive posture reveals her need to be noticed by the men.

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What George’s feelings about her?

Why is she in the bunkhouse?

How does she talk to the men?

What does her provocative body language show?

What does her appearance suggest about how she

would like to live Why is she incongruous

on a working ranch? What does her appearance

reveal about her?

Curley’s wife Chapter 2

Use the questions below to complete the PEEL chain

table.

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Of Mice and Men

Controlled Assessment Preparation lesson

8

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Title:

Presentations of Curley’s Wife

How does this quote link to the theme of

dreams? Copy and complete the following…

“Although there was evening brightness showing

through the windows of the bunkhouse, inside it

was dusk”.

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Learning

Objectives

How does Steinbeck use light and

dark to help present Curley’s Wife?

How does Steinbeck use language to

change the tone and atmosphere of

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Light and Dark

When Curley’s Wife first appears in

the bunkhouse (Ch.2 p.53), both

Lennie and George notice that the

rectangle of sunshine in the doorway

is cut off, for example……….

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Light and Dark

After Curley’s Wife has died (ch.5

p129):

‘the sun streaks were high on

the wall by now, and the light was

growing soft in the barn.’

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A change in

atmosphere…

Read Ch.4 from p.109…

‘Any of you boys seen Curley?’

Answer the following questions:

1. How does she change the atmosphere?

2. What does this show about their ‘dream’?

3. What element of the poem ‘To a Mouse’

does this represent?

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Homework

How does Steinbeck present Curley’s

Wife in a positive light?

Use a PEEL chain to answer the

question.

Use your redeeming features worksheet

to help you.

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PEEL CHAIN

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What are George’s feelings about her?

Why is she in the bunkhouse?

How does she talk to the men?

What does her provocative body language show?

What does her appearance suggest about how she

would like to live Why is she incongruous

on a working ranch? What does her appearance

reveal about her?

Curley’s wife Chapter 2

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Of Mice and Men

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Title:

Planning an essay

STARTER:

Read through the revision notes on

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Band Read and understand texts, selecting

material appropriate to purpose. Develop and sustain interpretations of writers’ ideas and perspectives.

0 marks Nothing written, or what is written is totally irrelevant to text/not worthy of credit.

Band 1

1-7 marks Candidates: make limited attempt to respond to whole texts; can identify in a limited way some aspects of content, characters or situation and will

rely on narrative.

Candidates: show limited response to the main events of the whole text; show limited awareness of explicit meanings and ideas and significant features of characters.

Band 2 8-15 marks

Candidates: make some attempt to respond to texts; can identify some aspects of content, characters or situation, but may still rely on narrative.

Candidates: show response to

significant characters, relationships and main events;

show awareness of explicit

meanings and ideas and significant features of characters.

Band 3

16-23 marks Candidates: can describe the main ideas and themes; make a personal response;

begin to select relevant and apt detail; begin to probe the sub-text.

Candidates: refer to specific aspects or details when justifying their views; show basic awareness of how texts achieve their effects through the writers’ use of language.

Band 4

24-31 marks Candidates: can understand and demonstrate how meaning and information are conveyed in texts;select and evaluate textual details appropriately;

probe texts confidently.

Candidates: make personal and critical responses, referring to specific aspects of language, grammar and structure to justify their views; convey ideas clearly and appropriately.

Band 5 32-40 marks

Candidates: make cogent and critical responses; choose textual references carefully and are able to comment fully on the significance of particular words, phrases and stylistic features; make subtle and discriminating links.

Candidates: show originality of analysis and interpretation when evaluating patterns and details of words and images; are able to evaluate and comment on characters/relationships and attitudes/motives; at the highest level, consistently handle texts with confidence, have an overview and convey ideas cogently and make assured analysis of stylistic features.

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Mock Question

Examine the characterisation of

Curley’s Wife in the novel

Of Mice

and Men.

Use close textual analysis in your

answer.

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Planning

Introduction:

(Link to question and context)

Curley’s Wife is characterised as both ...

Paragraph 1:

Paragraph 2:

Paragraph 3:

Paragraph 4:

Conclusion:

By characterising Curley’s Wife

as ... Steinbeck comments on 1930s

American society...

Quotes or specific references to events needed

throughout

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Introduction: (Link to question and context)Curley’s Wife is

characterised as both ...

Point 1: Steinbeck forewarns the reader by having Candy

warn George about Curley’s Wife. Refer to Candy’s first meeting with George.

Point 2: Steinbeck describes her in physical terms that

emphasis her sexual attractiveness and her use of this to tease men.

Point 3: Curley’s Wife can be cruel, willing to misuse her

power. Refer to what happens in Crooks room.

Point 4: She is also shown as a vulnerable victim. Refer to

the final description of her lying dead in the barn.

Point 5: Curley’s Wife had dreams of being an actress. Steinbeck creates sympathy for her by revealing her lost dreams. Refer to her discussion with Lennie.

Conclusion: By characterising Curley’s Wife as ... Steinbeck

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Make sure you use

P

E

E

L

chains to answer the question

For example…

POINT:

The other men treat Crooks really badly.

EVIDENCE:

Candy comments that ‘Smitty took

after the nigger ... We had fun’.

EXPLANATION:

This implies that Crooks was

beaten as a form of entertainment for the other

men. The use of the word ‘nigger’ is a racist term

that shows lack of respect and proves that the men

view Crooks as inferior.

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Mock Question: Examine the

characterisation of Curley’s Wife

in the novel

Of Mice and Men

.

Use close textual analysis in

your answer.

Sentence starter

Curley’s Wife is characterised as both …

Success Criteria:

1. Make sure you use quotes to back up points you make.

2. Analyse Steinbeck's use of language, grammar and structure. 3. Discuss what Steinbeck shows us (not just what he tells us)

reading between the lines.

4. Make links to the themes in the novel e.g. CW links to the theme of the American Dream/ loneliness/ segregation.

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Homework (see FROG) due Tuesday

2

nd

October

To revise the presentation of Curley's Wife in

preparation for the CA next week.

TASK 1:

Draw a picture of Curley's Wife and

label it with 6 quotes from the book. (Use

your extract booklet to find quotes).

TASK 2

: Pick one quote and write a PEEL

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Begin Planning...

Use the remainder of this lesson to plan a response

Brainstorm your key points and ensure you find quotes!

Your practice response will be marked!

This will help you prepare for your controlled assessment.

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Next lesson

You will be given next lesson to write your response

You will be able to ask questions and I can give you written

feedback – this cannot happen when your planning for

your controlled assessment so use this opportunity!

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Of Mice and Men

Controlled Assessment Preparation lesson

10

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Mock Controlled Assessment

Examine the characterisation of

Curley’s Wife in the novel

Of Mice

and Men.

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Planning

Introduction:

(Link to question and context)

Curley’s Wife is characterised as both ...

Paragraph 1:

Paragraph 2:

Paragraph 3:

Paragraph 4:

Conclusion:

By characterising Curley’s Wife

as ... Steinbeck comments on 1930s

American society...

Quotes or specific references to events needed

throughout

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Introduction: (Link to question and context)Curley’s Wife is

characterised as both ...

Point 1: Steinbeck forewarns the reader by having Candy

warn George about Curley’s Wife. Refer to Candy’s first meeting with George.

Point 2: Steinbeck describes her in physical terms that

emphasis her sexual attractiveness and her use of this to tease men.

Point 3: Curley’s Wife can be cruel, willing to misuse her

power. Refer to what happens in Crooks room.

Point 4: She is also shown as a vulnerable victim. Refer to

the final description of her lying dead in the barn.

Point 5: Curley’s Wife had dreams of being an actress. Steinbeck creates sympathy for her by revealing her lost dreams. Refer to her discussion with Lennie.

Conclusion: By characterising Curley’s Wife as ... Steinbeck

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Make sure you use

P

E

E

L

chains to answer the question

For example…

POINT:

The other men treat Crooks really badly.

EVIDENCE:

Candy comments that ‘Smitty took

after the nigger ... We had fun’.

EXPLANATION:

This implies that Crooks was

beaten as a form of entertainment for the other

men. The use of the word ‘nigger’ is a racist term

that shows lack of respect and proves that the men

view Crooks as inferior.

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Mock Question: Examine the

characterisation of Curley’s Wife

in the novel

Of Mice and Men

.

Use close textual analysis in

your answer.

Sentence starter

Curley’s Wife is characterised as both …

Success Criteria:

1. Make sure you use quotes to back up points you make.

2. Analyse Steinbeck's use of language, grammar and structure. 3. Discuss what Steinbeck shows us (not just what he tells us)

reading between the lines.

4. Make links to the themes in the novel e.g. CW links to the theme of the American Dream/ loneliness/ segregation.

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Homework (see FROG) due Tuesday

2

nd

October

To revise the presentation of Curley's Wife in

preparation for the CA next week.

TASK 1:

Draw a picture of Curley's Wife and

label it with 6 quotes from the book. (Use

your extract booklet to find quotes).

TASK 2

: Pick one quote and write a PEEL

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Of Mice and Men

Controlled Assessment Preparation

lesson 11 Curley’s Wife as Victim and

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Mock Question: Examine the

characterisation of Curley’s Wife

in the novel

Of Mice and Men

.

Use close textual analysis in

your answer.

Sentence starter

Curley’s Wife is characterised as both …

Success Criteria:

1. Make sure you use quotes to back up points you make.

2. Analyse Steinbeck's use of language, grammar and structure. 3. Discuss what Steinbeck shows us (not just what he tells us)

reading between the lines.

4. Make links to the themes in the novel e.g. CW links to the theme of the American Dream/ loneliness/ segregation.

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Title:

Curley’s Wife as Victim and

Sinner

Look at your homework. What

quotes did you find the

support Curley’s Wife as…

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Title:

Curley’s Wife – the victim or

sinner?

After Lennie kills Curley’s Wife,

Steinbeck describes her in detail to show

how different she looks. Her innocent

and helpless side is emphasised.

TASKS:

Add arrows to link the boxes to the text.

Then complete the table on the opposite

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Useful Quotes

Complete the worksheet looking at Curley’s

Wife’s two contrasting sides

.

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Of Mice and Men

Controlled Assessment Preparation lesson 13

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Today’s Lesson

You will get the real question. We will discuss the notes page.

You will begin planning.

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Notes Page

When Controlled Assessment

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The notes may include any information that

the student may find helpful when attempting

the assignment.

For example, the notes may contain:

The exact title of the task

Page references for particular

scenes/chapters or significant sections

of the text

Key quotations

Lists of characters

General notes on approaches

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Plan

1. Look at how Calpurnia is first presented- Scout’s view- biased. Calpurnia a disciplinarian.

2. Think a bout how Calpurnia has helped Scout- writing. 3. Walter Cunningham- more lessons in manners.

4. Looks after children- dog incident- protective

5. Changing relationship with Scout- when Jem becomes more grown up. Closer to her and more gentle- sympathetic to her situation. 6. Look at how she is seen in her own community (church

visit)-respected and literate. Highly regarded and upright. Surprise to Scout.

7. Care of the children in the church- what it says about her that she takes them.

8. Aunt Alexandra’s view- not suitable to bring up the children.

Atticus’s view about Calpurnia and the way he values her equally, not as an inferior.

9. The dignity of Calpurnia when hearing of Tom’s death. 10.How she helps Helen Robinson.

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Opening

When we first meet Calpurnia in the first chapter of

the book, Scout only mentions her unpleasant

characteristics. Scout obviously resents the

authority Calpurnia has over her and she points out

her features in negative language: ‘She was all

angles and bones…her hand was as wide as a bed

slat and twice as hard.’ At this stage in the book,

Scout does not like Calpurnia but when reading

these lines we are aware that Scout is simply

recounting the feelings of a small girl and our more

adult eyes probably side with Calpurnia in feeling

that the little girl needs a firm hand to keep her in

order. This hand Calpurnia provides. This ironic

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Page references

First appearance: Page 11

Writing: Page 24

Walter Cunningham: Page 30

Mad dog: Page 98

Jem growing up: Page 121

Church: page 123

Aunt Alexandra’s view: Page 142

Courtroom: 212

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Key quotations

Calpurnia always won, mainly because Atticus always took

her side. (Page12)

In Calpurnia’s teaching, there was no sentimentality. (Page

25)

‘Yo’ folks might be better’n the Cunninghams but it don’t

count for nothin’ the way you’re disgracing ‘em.’ (Page 30

Calpurnia stared, then grabbed us by the shoulders and ran

us home. (Page 99)

‘I don’t want anybody sayin’ I don’t look after my children.’

(Page 123)

That Calpurnia led a modest double life never dawned on

me.’ Page 131)

‘She tried to bring up according to her lights and Cal’s

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Remember:

Prove what you say by reference to the text.

Keep the quotations short.

Look at the way the author uses the language-

word choices etc.

Don’t tell the story.

Think about the way Calpurnia reacts to other

people and what other people

think of her.

Remember that Scout tells the story and we see

Calpurnia through her eyes.

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The Question….

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QUESTION (CHARACTE R) Introduction-Link character to question and context Relationship with other Characters (What do they say about her?)

Body language and appearance Attitudes & Behaviour Themes Language / motifs Conclusion

Character

Quotes or specific references to

events needed throughout

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Of Mice and Men

Lesson 14 - Controlled Assessment Preparation

Hand back drafts and continue planning notes

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Drafts back

Discuss feedback (looking at how to

write a good introduction and

conclusion).

Continue Planning and begin your notes

page.

Title:

How to write a strong

introduction and conclusion

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Introductions

...should be a brief paragraph introducing

The title

Points you will discuss or argue

It should give the reader an insight into

what you wish to discuss but still

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The first line

Your first line of your essay should start with the

essay title reworded to display your understanding of

the task.

Example

Title: How does our perception of Curley’s wife change throughout the story?

Example first line: Throughout the story “Of Mice and Men” our

perception of the character Curley’s wife changes.

The following words are used from the title to the first line:

Throughout the story “Of Mice and Men” our perception of the

character Curley’s wife changes.

Example

Title: How does our perception of Curley’s wife change throughout the story?

Example first line: Throughout the story “Of Mice and Men” our

perception of the character Curley’s wife changes.

The following words are used from the title to the first line:

Throughout the story “Of Mice and Men” our perception of the

character Curley’s wife changes.

Task

Using the following titles consider the first line of the

introduction

• How is Curley’s wife

presented? Do you find this portrayal a sympathetic one?

• Many of the characters in “Of Mice and Men” have dreams. How do their dreams hide their loneliness?

• Describe and discuss the

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The first line needs to read something like

these…

How is Curley’s wife presented? Do you find this portrayal a sympathetic one?

The way Curley’s wife is presentation changes throughout the

story. There are times when the reader may feel sympathy for the character.

Many of the characters in “Of Mice and Men” have dreams. How do their dreams hide their loneliness?

Nearly all of the characters in “Of Mice and Men” have dreams. Their dreams show how they would like a better life. They also reveal their loneliness.

Describe and discuss the relationship between George and Lennie.

The relationship between George and Lennie is shown as a complicated relationship.

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The rest of the introduction

The rest of the introduction needs to introduce

the points you will discuss throughout the essay.

First line: Throughout the story “Of Mice and Men” our perception of the character Curley’s wife changes.

Rest of introduction:

At the start Curley’s wife is portrayed in a negative way. For example as a flirt who wears a lot of make-up.

Throughout the story we are given different views of her, some of which lead us to perceive her differently than first thought.

Now write the rest of the introduction for these titles:

• How is Curley’s wife presented? Do you find this portrayal a

sympathetic one?

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How is Curley’s wife presented? Do you find this portrayal a sympathetic one?

The way Curley’s wife is presentation changes throughout the story. There are times when the reader may feel sympathy for the

character. Steinbeck shows Curley’s wife as nothing but trouble from the start. However by the end we see the portrayal of this character in a different light.

Many of the characters in “Of Mice and Men” have dreams. How

do their dreams hide their loneliness?

Nearly all of the characters in “Of Mice and Men” have dreams. Their dreams show how they would like a better life. They act as a cover to their loneliness. Loneliness and dreams are a reoccurring theme

throughout the story. There are times when they bring characters together and times when they can destroy them.

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How to write a conclusion

You have already done the

hard part ... This bit is easy!! The conclusion is a reflection of your

introduction. This means rewriting your introduction in a way that summarises all the points.

The conclusion is a reflection of your introduction. This means rewriting your introduction in a way that summarises all the points.

You start a conclusion the same way you started the introduction with the

title

.

You start a conclusion the same way you started the introduction with the

title

.

Example: How does our perception of Curley’s wife change throughout the story?

In conclusion our perception of Curley’s wife changes throughout the

story. At first we see her as trouble who flirts with the other ranch hands. As the story goes forward Steinbeck shows how she also is unhappy with her life. It also shows her to be just as vulnerable as other characters. She shares her dreams, which also shows her loneliness. Therefore Curley’s wife is just as lonely as the other characters.

Consider the conclusion for this question:

How is Curley’s wife presented? Do you find this portrayal a

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Answer

How is Curley’s wife presented? Do you find this portrayal a

sympathetic one?

In conclusion the way Curley’s wife is presentation changes

throughout the story. At first Steinbeck presents Curley’s wife as trouble to the other ranch hands. This is through her

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Of Mice and Men

Controlled Assessment Preparation

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Today’s lesson

This is your final lesson before your controlled

assessment

Use this time to plan a response and to ensure

your notes page is finished!

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Of Mice and Men

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Title: Write at the top of the page Quotes______________________________________________________________________ Key Words______________________________________________________________________ Things to Remember

_________________________

_________________________

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Quotes

Bullet point quotes you are going to use

on your essay.

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Key Words

Bullet point SINGLE key words.

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Things to Remember

Write down notes from my feedback on your draft.

You may also want to include:

Use PEEL

Talk about the writer

Talk about the readers response.

Analyse Steinbeck's use of language, grammar and

structure

Discuss what Steinbeck shows us (not just what he

tells us) reading between the lines.

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