MUET Writing 800/4 tips :
Factual Writing
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Right, I've been thinking about why my students cant score higher than band 3 and 4... and I've finally hit the nail on its head. It's because students these days include too many
generalisations and sweeping
statements which are not backed up by facts. So then I sent them of a fact finding research and they have come back with key facts that can be used in
their essays. I've then compiled (the first batch below) the info and written MUET style academic sentences
which addresses key issues. I then
printed out the samples below and got them to highlight whichever parts
they considered as factual. Then in my next lesson, I will give them some
sections with fill in the blanks activity (fill with facts) and some sections
where they have to write their own sample sentences using the facts they can recall. Anyway, whichever style you use to present is not the issue but the fact that Band 5 & 6 students are expected to have a very HIGH LEVEL OF CRITICAL THINKING and
maturity of ideas is reflected based on the content of their academic essays.
So students out there, read the
examples below and highlight the facts. Teachers, get your students to do it. An enrichment activity is you can give them more issues and they can write their own samples, maybe one group one issue.
My next blog will be on using
Malaysian government policies as content for factual and academic
writing. So stay tuned and don't forget to comment about this technique. Was it effective for you? Your students? :P
FACTUAL WRITING 1. WAR
In terms of world peace, we
should never repeat the mistakes of World War I in 1918 where we lost about 5 million people and World War II in 1945 that took the lives of more than 61 million. These wars are concrete
examples of why killing and death are not acceptable.
Instead, we should find a way through the United Nations and other such organisations to
conduct peace talks at all costs because wars give nothing but negative impact to the human race.
2. ENVIRONMENT
Mankind is doing irreparable damage to mother nature to the
extent that more and more
natural disasters have occurred in recent times such as the
undersea earthquake a day after Christmas in 2004 which
unleashed multiple tsunamis in 14 countries killing over 230,000 people. More recent are the
earthquakes in New Zealand last year and this year Japan was hit full force by a tsunami that
almost destroyed the Fukushima nuclear power plant and caused a nuclear meltdown similar to the radioactive disaster in
Chernobyl, Ukriane (1986).
Therefore, we must reduce our negative impact to the
environment because it will
3. NATIONAL UNITY
There are many lessons we can learn from our own history
including the May 13 1969 racial riots between the Malay and
Chinese especially in Kampung Baru, Kuala Lumpur. Almost 200 people were killed and this really emphasised why we need to be more understanding,
tolerant and respectful of each others’ cultural differences.
Otherwise, another terrible
racial riot will occur and this will destroy the national unity that we have worked so hard to
achieve for the past half century of independence.
4. TERRORISM
World peace is threatened when terrorists launch attacks such as the 9/11/2001 hijacking of two 767 jets into the twin towers of the World Trade Centre in New York City. This is such a tragedy because it took 2,753 lives but there are uncountable more
lives, maybe millions, that have been shaken by this terrible
event. This has led to more lives lost through the hunting down of Saddam Hussien and Osama bin Laden, both of whom were
influential leaders that
commanded troops of terrorists. Hence, the governments of each country need to work hand in
further terrorist threat. 5. PATRIOTISM
In recent times, the world has seen a number of tragedies that are unbelievable and atrocious such as the bombing in Oslo, Norway where Anders Brevik
went on a shooting rampage and killed at least 77 youths because he was against multiculturalism and Muslim immigration. Thus, although we should be patriotic at all times, there must be
moderation because the extremism showed by
Norweigian Anders Behring Breivik is very unhealthy and this does not create peace, but instigates world wars.
6. PROUD TO BE MALAYSIAN We should be proud to be living in a peaceful land as there are no wars, enough food and
opportunity to improve our
standard of living. On the other hand, places like Palestine face the uncertainty and horrors of war every day, while there are
many crisis elsewhere such as in Somalia, Afghanistan and even in Thailand which is our direct neighbour. In short, we need to defend our peace and freedom not just for this generation but for our children, and our
7. ENDANGERED ANIMALS
Datuk Michelle Yeoh from Perak is an international actress most famed for her role in action
movies and being the Bond girl in ‘Tomorrow never dies’ is also known for her full support of the anti-smuggling of endangered animals campaign. Along with celebrities such as Jackie Chan, they both support the saying,
“When the buying stops, the killing will too.” Therefore, we should also support this
campaign to stop the buying of illegal animal products such as ground rhino horn, ornamental elephant tusks and animal fur and skin to make clothes and accessories.
8. INSPIRATIONAL PEOPLE Tun Dr. Mahathir Mohamed is an extremely inspirational man as he was the longest serving
prime minister of Malaysia from 1981 to 2003 during which he
was called the ‘Father of
Modernisation’. We have a lot to thank him for including our
aspiration to achieve the
developed nation status through Vision 2020. He was also behind the successful programs such as Multimedia Super Corridor,
Proton cars, KLCC and KL towers, Formula 1 Sepang
Circuit and many more which have brought prosperity and
Malaysians. Therefore, to me he is truly inspirational as even
today he has his own website, blog and Facebook page where he shows eloquence and critical thinking even though he is now 86 years old.
9. SPORTS
Malaysia has a lot to be proud of in terms of sports as today we
have two individuals in racquet sports that are ranked No. 1 in the world. They are Datuk Lee Chong Wei for badminton and Datuk Nicol Ann David for
squash, both hailing from the island of Penang. The two are prime examples of a
good upbringing because they have managed to divide their time to be a successful
sportsperson. Datuk Nicol is 28 years old and been playing
squash intensively since young but she still managed to score flying colours in her SPM where she obtained 7As. This is
evidence that with the right
attitude and diligence, anything is possible.
10. BUSINESS
Malaysia is proud to have
businessmen who have carved a name for themselves in the
international arena. Tan Sri Anthony Francis Fernandes,
best low-cost airline (2009-2011) which has created countless
opportunities for Malaysians to travel around the world for
business and leisure. With his amazing tagline, “Now everyone can fly”, it is truly wonderful
that we can experience
international travel because
travelling is now affordable for all. Another famous Malaysian entrepreneur is Datuk Jimmy Choo, famed for his exquisite handmade heels which are
sought after by all the celebrities in America and the whole world including the fashionista Sarah Jessica Parker, a famous
Hollywood actress. Therefore, we should always look for
opportunities to expand our business not just in the
Malaysian market but penetrate the international market as well.
