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Lady Macbeth Poster

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To begin, I would like to deeply apologize for any pain and grief my unintentional actions have caused. I recognize that many, including the MacDuff family, King Duncan and his family, and the Siward family have been sincerely hurt. Deep grief has overcome all of Scotland as a result of an infestation of Satan’s minions. It is time for us to heal as a country and to banish these witches from ever causing despair again.

When my husband first told me about these beings, he informed me that they prophesied his crowning. Of course, this would altercate the natural order of my beloved

country, as well as shatter the loyal, unbreakable bond between Macbeth and Duncan. Normally, such a thought would disturb me, and the thought of taking action upon this prophecy would appall me. However, the witches infected my mind with a foreign sense of ambition to retrieve the crown.

Scotland was once a strong, family, all gears turning properly. I am deeply sorry that I was not strong enough to

fight the spirits who attempted to disturb the well working order of our society. I am sincerely apologetic that my feminine weakness allowed these witches to possess me, and to transform me into an androgynous being. I

recognize, that it was my vulnerability that allowed me to be overcome by these creatures, and although my husband was stronger than me, I allowed them to let me convince him to fall for the curse.

Please, I beg of you, help me to return Scotland to way it once was. Help me to regain our pride, and our sense of family. It is not I who wishes to bring despair to my fellow citizens. This was the motive of sociopathic witches from hell. I am merely a victim of their possessions. They have brought sorrow to me too, in the form of insomnia, hellish nightmares, and of course the grief of my country.

If we all fight them together, Scotland can become again the beautiful country it was. We must fight for our country and banish these witches back to the wretched

underworld. Together we are strong, and together we must fight back!

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I begin by acknowledging any pain Lady Macbeth’s actions may have caused, which pleases people. People like to hear others admit to wrongdoings, people like to hear “I’m sorry.”

Next, I used a sense of nationalism during the speech in order to attempt to convince the citizens of Scotland that they are a family and they must fight against any foreigners, namely the witches. For example, I say “If we all fight them together, Scotland can become again the beautiful country it was”. This gives off a strong vibe of nationalism. Innately, humans want to be a part of something and to defend that. This strategy plays on this natural instinct in order to convince the citizens to fight the witches and not Lady Macbeth.

Additionally, I often refer to the “natural order” of the society. This allows big decision makers to be on board with what Lady Macbeth is saying. The important people of Scotland of course are not against the theory of “natural order” because they benefit from it. They are also the people with the most say, and will therefore support Lady Macbeth when they hear her refer to it.

I also use very negative diction in order to depict the witches as terrible creatures to the audience. This also gives the people someone to blame their grief on. People like to blame others, and if they are presented with non-human, evil beings on whom they can blame their problems, they will probably take the opportunity.

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Student Work

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Lady Macbeth Poster

Promotional Image Strategist

Slogan is brief and

to the point -

understands the

immediacy of the

form’s messaging

Use of the Obama

‘Hope’ template is

one of the

exemplars offered;

therefore it

demonstrates

somewhat limited

creativity

Image selected for

Lady Macbeth could

have perhaps been

more suggestive of

her innocence;

image in profile

obscures part of her

face, conveying the

idea that she may be

hiding something

The choice of the word

“Liberate” implies that she

is imprisoned by Macbeth.

This is an effective

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To begin, I would like to deeply apologize for any pain and grief my unintentional actions have caused. I recognize that many, including the MacDuff family, King Duncan and his family, and the Siward family have been sincerely hurt. Deep grief has overcome all of Scotland as a result of an infestation of Satan’s minions. It is time for us to heal as a country and to banish these witches from ever causing despair again.

When my husband first told me about these beings, he informed me that they prophesied his crowning. Of course, this would altercate the natural order of my beloved

country, as well as shatter the loyal, unbreakable bond between Macbeth and Duncan. Normally, such a thought would disturb me, and the thought of taking action upon this prophecy would appall me. However, the witches infected my mind with a foreign sense of ambition to retrieve the crown.

Scotland was once a strong, family, all gears turning properly. I am deeply sorry that I was not strong enough to

fight the spirits who attempted to disturb the well working order of our society. I am sincerely apologetic that my feminine weakness allowed these witches to possess me, and to transform me into an androgynous being. I

recognize, that it was my vulnerability that allowed me to be overcome by these creatures, and although my husband was stronger than me, I allowed them to let me convince him to fall for the curse.

Please, I beg of you, help me to return Scotland to way it once was. Help me to regain our pride, and our sense of family. It is not I who wishes to bring despair to my fellow citizens. This was the motive of sociopathic witches from hell. I am merely a victim of their possessions. They have brought sorrow to me too, in the form of insomnia, hellish nightmares, and of course the grief of my country.

If we all fight them together, Scotland can become again the beautiful country it was. We must fight for our country and banish these witches back to the wretched

underworld. Together we are strong, and together we must fight back!

Lady Macbeth’s Innocence Speech

Information Strategist

Effectively conveys

elements of

political speech

(redirection of

anger; strong

emotional appeal

to both fear and

pride of country).

Effective use

of repetition

and diction to

suggest Lady

Macbeth’s

victimization

by the

witches

Effective

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I begin by acknowledging any pain Lady Macbeth’s actions may have caused, which pleases people. People like to hear others admit to wrongdoings, people like to hear “I’m sorry.”

Next, I used a sense of nationalism during the speech in order to attempt to convince the citizens of Scotland that they are a family and they must fight against any foreigners, namely the witches. For example, I say “If we all fight them together, Scotland can become again the beautiful country it was”. This gives off a strong vibe of nationalism. Innately, humans want to be a part of something and to defend that. This strategy plays on this natural instinct in order to convince the citizens to fight the witches and not Lady Macbeth.

Additionally, I often refer to the “natural order” of the society. This allows big decision makers to be on board with what Lady Macbeth is saying. The important people of Scotland of course are not against the theory of “natural order” because they benefit from it. They are also the people with the most say, and will therefore support Lady Macbeth when they hear her refer to it.

I also use very negative diction in order to depict the witches as terrible creatures to the audience. This also gives the people someone to blame their grief on. People like to blame others, and if they are presented with non-human, evil beings on whom they can blame their problems, they will probably take the opportunity.

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Spelling, grammar and

proofreading errors

detract from overall

quality of

communication and

would not be suitable

for release to the

media

Demonstrates

reasonable

understanding of

literary text

Does have some

elements of press

releases (contact

information) but is

missing some other

elements.

Text is organized as more of a

summary than a news report. At

times, it is also too subjectivley

written to fit the form of a press

release.

Language and

diction are

occasionally too

advanced for a

proper press

release

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Explanation of Media Campaign

M1 - Properly labels media

techniques

:53 The Blame Game

3:47 Name Calling

4:24 Straw Man

10:00 Fear Mongering

M3 - Effective use of

Twitter’s limited 140

character format

O2 - Speaks clearly and

articulately but would

benefit from a script to

avoid stumbles. 2:50 -

2:59

M3 - Suffers from

poor audio

recording 5:20

M2 - Press

release reads

more like a

speech. Improper

organization, point

of view, and

diction 5:20 - 7:45

M2 - effectively

redirects blame to

the witches. 7:45

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